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Re: Kilvas' Gallery
ooo i want a keychain
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Picture looked pretty, Avatar looks cute, and I better be getting that Teddie Keychain for my birthday!
Also, what made you pick those particular backgrounds for Tauros and Ares? Is there some kind of mythological reason? Or did it just fit?
Also, what made you pick those particular backgrounds for Tauros and Ares? Is there some kind of mythological reason? Or did it just fit?
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Lol.Mufasa wrote:Picture looked pretty, Avatar looks cute, and I better be getting that Teddie Keychain for my birthday!
Also, what made you pick those particular backgrounds for Tauros and Ares? Is there some kind of mythological reason? Or did it just fit?
Yeah, mythological reasons mostly. I wanted the backgrounds more fantasy like, but the person who requested it didn't, Lol. Well, for the animals that represent the signs, I tried to put them in their natural habitat. The circle around each of the represent the signs element. Aries = Fire, Taurus = Earth.
Then I had the Bull and Ram constellations next to them, along with their sign. Lol.
Re: Kilvas' Gallery
Justice wrote:ooo i want a keychain
you use your money on that you can kiss your loli goodbye
lol.
Love the avatar btw kilvas
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Valvatorez wrote:Justice wrote:ooo i want a keychain
you use your money on that you can kiss your loli goodbye
lol.
Love the avatar btw kilvas
Oh damn ur right! sorry Kilvas, but I'll buy the ponies after Ive saved up to buy my loli.
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Lol. I understand. xD Outta context that can look kinda strange, XDJustice wrote:Valvatorez wrote:Justice wrote:ooo i want a keychain
you use your money on that you can kiss your loli goodbye
lol.
Love the avatar btw kilvas
Oh damn ur right! sorry Kilvas, but I'll buy the ponies after Ive saved up to buy my loli.I swear I'm not a freak.
The bedsheets. Lol See? I took that outta context. xD
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cool what did u make them out of?
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Thank you. 8DJustice wrote:cool what did u make them out of?
Paper, glue, a chain, some were on cardboard (Applejack, Rainbow), and others (Twilight, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie) on some foamy kinda paper stuff. Lol.
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Damn those are pretty goodLinuxMaiden wrote:MLP KEYCHAINS
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/art/MLP-keychains-259961905
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Bleh, rush for the collab, due today, and I just remembed about it a 10 last night. ><
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/art/Eelektross-collab-262322159
And more FEDV character art~!
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4c6dyk
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/art/Eelektross-collab-262322159
And more FEDV character art~!
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4c6dyk
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2 chibis. lol gawd it's been forever since i did a YGO chibi. lol
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4d40jr
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4d40pd
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4d40jr
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4d40pd
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HAPPY HALLOWEEN
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4e9a1j
yaaay
Might have a speedpaint tomorrow, let's see how well that turns out. Lol.
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4e9a1j
yaaay
Might have a speedpaint tomorrow, let's see how well that turns out. Lol.
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Lookin' good. I like the style.
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MORE HALLOWEEN
Guess I should post the vid in the other topic too. lol.
vid: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zdi9jTn5jfA
Pic: http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4egbhm
Background didn't come out so great, but it was 1am, I WAS TIRED. D:
Guess I should post the vid in the other topic too. lol.
vid: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zdi9jTn5jfA
Pic: http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4egbhm
Background didn't come out so great, but it was 1am, I WAS TIRED. D:
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Concept art!
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4gqy5v
I wasn't too sure about the colors, but I think it turned out ok. lol.
and random doodles lol:
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4gqyq2
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4gqy5v
I wasn't too sure about the colors, but I think it turned out ok. lol.
and random doodles lol:
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4gqyq2
Re: Kilvas' Gallery
I dunno what it is, maybe it's my imagination, but I think your art style has vastly improved all of the sudden. The manga page and the concept art look really good to me for some reason.
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is it wrong that the first improvement I noticed were the boobs? after that though great job on the shading it looks less flat and static. and the pose is more dynamic as well.
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Shading: Looks like your shading has improved a fair amount since last time I had a look at your stuff, but if you're still using Burn and Dodge for it I'd recommend switching to at least using brush tool set to "multiply" or "linear burn" for shading and "screen" or "linear dodge" for lighting, it gives you a lot more control of how shading and lighting turn out. I know a lot of people who just make two separate layers for shading and lighting and set the whole layer's blending mode to multiply/screen/what have you, you might try that if your software supports layers. Also, not sure what's going on with the shiny skin. o_o
Anatomy has gotten... well it was weird in certain ways previously, it's weird in different ways now it looks like... anyway, going from the top down:
-Head: Eyes are nicely rendered but placement is weird. I can understand if you're going for "shojou manga head" style, but even if you do that either the eyes are too low or the ears are too high-- on a realistic head ears go from the bottom of the nose to the top of the eyes, obviously making the eyes huge for stylization purposes will alter that but they still look really weird going from the middle of the eye to above the top of the eye.
-Neck: Thinner than realistic but again I can understand that much, since most cartoon styles do that. What weirds me out here is that it's really long.
-Shoulders and torso: The shoulders are looking pretty decent. The ribcage is really short, though-- it's only about a head tall. This would make sense if the rest of the body were similarly shortened, but it isn't, and in fact it appears that the hips have been made extra tall to compensate-- also really weird. Dropping the waist lower, to the middle of the torso, would solve that part. Her right breast (viewer's left) also seems to be smaller than the left, and also... stretched sideways? It's difficult to explain; if I have a little more time later I'll do a trace of the underlying figure to show you what I see happening.
-Arms: Oh dear. For starters, the upper arms are different lengths in a way that foreshortening cannot explain. Her left upper arm (viewer's right) is not only longer than the right, but appears to be curved. I guess muscle/fat could do that? maybe? but if that's the case that arm would have to be much bigger around than the other, and somewhat off balance from the rest of the body. I'm not entirely sure what's going on with the foreshortening on her left forearm but her right one looks okay (on the whole I'd say her right arm looks pretty good until we get to the hand). I'm not gonna gripe too much about fingers and whatnot because lord knows those are hard to draw and I'm bad at it too, but those hands are tiny and it also appears that if uncurled, her left hand would be bigger than her right.
-Hips: As mentioned before, pelvis seems to be bizarrely tall. I'm assuming the crotch is about where the legs start to make folds in the skirt, which would point to the pelvis being too tall and also kind of misshappen-- it actually looks okay on the (viewer's) right but the other side is a lot weirder. I honestly have no idea what's going on between her knees and ankles, it looks like part of the calf is visible in a way that it shouldn't be-- or are her legs crossed? It's very hard to tell. Thighs would also appear to be shorter than lower legs, which could be a stylistic decision I suppose. The feet are also somewhat smaller than I'd expect for connecting to what we can see of her legs.
-Overall pose: I'm... really not sure what to make of it. Are her legs crossed? And what are her arms meant to be doing?
Other stuff: I am not at all sure about that star brush.
Definitely looks improved, though!
Anatomy has gotten... well it was weird in certain ways previously, it's weird in different ways now it looks like... anyway, going from the top down:
-Head: Eyes are nicely rendered but placement is weird. I can understand if you're going for "shojou manga head" style, but even if you do that either the eyes are too low or the ears are too high-- on a realistic head ears go from the bottom of the nose to the top of the eyes, obviously making the eyes huge for stylization purposes will alter that but they still look really weird going from the middle of the eye to above the top of the eye.
-Neck: Thinner than realistic but again I can understand that much, since most cartoon styles do that. What weirds me out here is that it's really long.
-Shoulders and torso: The shoulders are looking pretty decent. The ribcage is really short, though-- it's only about a head tall. This would make sense if the rest of the body were similarly shortened, but it isn't, and in fact it appears that the hips have been made extra tall to compensate-- also really weird. Dropping the waist lower, to the middle of the torso, would solve that part. Her right breast (viewer's left) also seems to be smaller than the left, and also... stretched sideways? It's difficult to explain; if I have a little more time later I'll do a trace of the underlying figure to show you what I see happening.
-Arms: Oh dear. For starters, the upper arms are different lengths in a way that foreshortening cannot explain. Her left upper arm (viewer's right) is not only longer than the right, but appears to be curved. I guess muscle/fat could do that? maybe? but if that's the case that arm would have to be much bigger around than the other, and somewhat off balance from the rest of the body. I'm not entirely sure what's going on with the foreshortening on her left forearm but her right one looks okay (on the whole I'd say her right arm looks pretty good until we get to the hand). I'm not gonna gripe too much about fingers and whatnot because lord knows those are hard to draw and I'm bad at it too, but those hands are tiny and it also appears that if uncurled, her left hand would be bigger than her right.
-Hips: As mentioned before, pelvis seems to be bizarrely tall. I'm assuming the crotch is about where the legs start to make folds in the skirt, which would point to the pelvis being too tall and also kind of misshappen-- it actually looks okay on the (viewer's) right but the other side is a lot weirder. I honestly have no idea what's going on between her knees and ankles, it looks like part of the calf is visible in a way that it shouldn't be-- or are her legs crossed? It's very hard to tell. Thighs would also appear to be shorter than lower legs, which could be a stylistic decision I suppose. The feet are also somewhat smaller than I'd expect for connecting to what we can see of her legs.
-Overall pose: I'm... really not sure what to make of it. Are her legs crossed? And what are her arms meant to be doing?
Other stuff: I am not at all sure about that star brush.
Definitely looks improved, though!
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Holy crap critique.
Well, I agree with most of what you said. The whole thing was done in like an hour and a half, so I'm expect alot of errors. Lol.
With the shading, most of it I did with the linear burn/dodge. I still tend to use Burn/Dodge tool sometimes, kind of a habit. Lol.
Long necks are also a bad habit too. ><
I like to think I can draw body parts well, and I do (mostly), when they're seperate (except hands and feet gawd I hate drawing those). But together in a pic I always get most of my proportions screwed up. Lol. Still something I'm trying to work on. ><
In terms of proportions, some of them are meant to be stylized and/or a little bit exaggurated. But I do think most of it can be worked on.
And no, her legs are not crossed, her knees are together, but not crossed. There's like a pidgeon-toed thing going on, Lol.
Thanks for the constructive critique.
Well, I agree with most of what you said. The whole thing was done in like an hour and a half, so I'm expect alot of errors. Lol.
With the shading, most of it I did with the linear burn/dodge. I still tend to use Burn/Dodge tool sometimes, kind of a habit. Lol.
Long necks are also a bad habit too. ><
I like to think I can draw body parts well, and I do (mostly), when they're seperate (except hands and feet gawd I hate drawing those). But together in a pic I always get most of my proportions screwed up. Lol. Still something I'm trying to work on. ><
In terms of proportions, some of them are meant to be stylized and/or a little bit exaggurated. But I do think most of it can be worked on.
And no, her legs are not crossed, her knees are together, but not crossed. There's like a pidgeon-toed thing going on, Lol.
Thanks for the constructive critique.
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Wooo done!
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4k8sbu
It was an FE secret santa thing I joined on dA, Lol. I'm nottoo good with cats, but I like how Ranulf turned out. I had touble with the background too. But I think it turned out alright.
Beware the mage and his awesome looking fire.
I also fiddled around in PS with a couple OCs, lol.
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/art/Sylvain-FE-themed-concept-275867676
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4k8sz3
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4k8t3e
now time to work on some manga stuff!
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/#/d4k8sbu
It was an FE secret santa thing I joined on dA, Lol. I'm nottoo good with cats, but I like how Ranulf turned out. I had touble with the background too. But I think it turned out alright.
Beware the mage and his awesome looking fire.
I also fiddled around in PS with a couple OCs, lol.
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/art/Sylvain-FE-themed-concept-275867676
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4k8sz3
http://princesskilvas.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=scraps#/d4k8t3e
now time to work on some manga stuff!
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