Pokemon Mystery Dungeon - Explorers

I just finished my biggest creative writing project ever.

It's part of a big group of Pokemon Mystery Dungeon guys. Everyone forms their own team of Pokemons and then goes on adventures. Also a lot of them die. It's rough.

So I did that, and my idiot team blunders through a few simple jobs. I am very proud of it/them.

http://fav.me/d5rmpcv

Feel free to critique it so's I might better improve skill.

(The next challenge is basketball for some reason. Wish me luck)